Happy WDC B-Day!

Some things I Like:

The description for this piece caught my eye (as did its placement in your highlighted items). I pretty much knew what I was in for, given the awardicons and ratings. I was ready to smile.

You did not disappoint. There are tons of super amusing lines in this piece. It was much longer than I expected it to be, but it never became stale or boring.

Observations & Suggestions:

I was surprised at the narrative quality of this piece. I expected a tirade or overtly harsh humor, really. This was much more than I envisioned from the description.

If I tried to give this an in-depth review, it would go on and on for ages. As a whole, the poem is very clever. You hooked me from the very first line. Awesome intro! A "poetry prom" is super amusing and brings to mind many of the trappings of the contests you're spoofing.

Anyway, thanks for the fun read! It's nice to stumble across a lengthy poem now and then that has some real entertainment value.






My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .