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Hi Justwoody!
This is pretty good, but I have to admit that I did see that ending coming. I've been reading stories like that for awhile, and I figured Rose was a either a cat or a dog. But it was still a good story!!!
You did a great job with your English (in fact, I didn't see a single mistake), and you kept the dialogue moving well. You have talent, my friend.
I also noticed that you have quite a few things in your portfolio for only being on here a few days. That's great! If you want more exposure for your items you can put them on the Request Review Page under Things To Do And Read on the left hand side.
Now, just kee ponw ritin gon, J.W., and welcome to WdC!

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