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Hi Minor!
This is cool story. You did a great job of using my prompt, but what I really liked was the gore! That intestine part was great! Excellent spelling, telling and description. My only suggestion would be to make this a little longer (you still had almost 600 words-oh, wait-I forgot you were in hurry to get it in, right?) and perhaps explain who that 'giant of a man' was.
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