Please remember that the following comments and observations are only my opinions. Take what you can use, but never be shy about discarding what you cannot.

Overall impression: This is a fun story that is part comedy and part yarn. The style is easy to read.

Characterization: The person telling the story is not named. The first person account brings the reader in the story all the way to the end. The encounter with various characters is interesting, but it is the exchange with a man who has a three-legged pig that makes the story even more fun.

Dialogue: I like the dialogue, and it advances the story.

Twists and turns: I liked the ending. Well done.

Area(s) for improvement: I have some suggestions. notes ▼



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