Please remember that the following comments and observations are only my opinions. Take what you can use, but never be shy about discarding what you cannot.

Overall impression: The bottom line is does this summary create interest for your book, and the answer is: yes. It gives a setting: hospital and circumstances: coma and amnesia that sound good for a story. The characters are briefly introduced and also sound interesting. The links to Amazon is a good idea, and posting a summary of the book at WDC is a good way to attract readers.


Area(s) for improvement: I have some suggestions. notes ▼



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