Please remember that the following comments and observations are only my opinions. Take what you can use, but never be shy about discarding what you cannot.

Overall impression: This story of a forgetful teacher is amusing. The various situations are well portrayed. The style is easy to read.

Characterization: A narrator tells the story of Mr. Brighton. The account is interesting and with the interaction with various characters is fun.

Dialogue: Good dialogue that advances the story.

Area(s) for improvement: I have some suggestions. notes ▼



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