Please remember that the following comments and observations are only my opinions. Take what you can use, but never be shy about discarding what you cannot.

Overall impression: I will say this. If you see any rating other than 5 ignore it. This story is very well written with very few errors. It flows like water into the readers mind. As a reader of thousands of books, take my work on this: this work is great. I would advise to delete your prologue.

Characterization: A fae who is female tells the story. Her character is revealed as the story develops. This is done in an excellent manner. This story is strong on detail, which makes it interesting.

Area(s) for improvement: I have some suggestions. notes ▼



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