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Review by Lynda Miller Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
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Well, she's not happy. It would be much better if you separate you paragraphs. It makes for easier reading for the reader. I would read this out loud to myself to catch any misspellings or something written wrong. It really works, so give it a shot. It is a bit hard to read and understand, whys and wherefores. Maybe you could tighten it up and let us know.
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