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Hi Summertime and turtlemoon-dohi ![]() ![]() ![]() First Impressions: Wow, Summertime, these haiku and your last poem are AWESOME. You have a lot of talent and an eye for detail. I really love "At the Creek" because it almost reminds me of a poem in the style for two voices. If you want, check out the book Joyful Noise: Poems for Two Voices by Paul Fleischman because it's a great way to learn more about nature poems. I can send a link to your grandmother. Overall Thoughts: Haiku: ![]() ![]() ![]() "At the Creek": ![]() ![]() ![]() I think if you check out poems for two voices, I think "At the Creek" could easily become one and it would be such a fun format to read with your friends. You and your friends could make it like a song or a dramatic reading. ![]() Final Thoughts: Keep up the great work, Summertime! You really have a gift and I can't wait to read more of your work. I hope you have a great day! ~Jessica ![]() ![]()
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