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 Touching Cloth Tetrus Open in new Window. [13+]
The difficulties of accessing a London cafe's toilet.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi George!
Nice piece. I think if I'd been in your shoes I would have just said the heck with it and used the women's 'bog'! As for that guy you passed, I guess you were just going to let him find out for himself, eh?
Great spelling, and you not only have a good sense of humor, but a nice writing style as well. You 'talk' to the reader, which makes them feel comfortable. In other words, you have a nice writing 'voice'.
One thing you might want to check: in your title you spell it 'tetrus', where as in your story you spell it 'tetras'. I tried to google both, but only came up with 'tetris', which is that video game (Russian).
Anyway, thanks for sharing this, and thanks for the laughs.
Kee ponw ritin gon, and welcome to WdC!

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