Hallo Perhaps and happy Thursday! I'm Grateful Jess and today I am beating the heat and resting my aching leg, so I have decided to read/review Shaman's Trance for RAOK Upgrade Brigade Group. Please remember these are only my opinions; feel free to use whichever you find helpful.

First Impressions:
What an interesting format! I'm not sure if starting in the center of a page on a website is the way to go - I can see for a book because there isn't scrolling, but it might not be popular for someone who uses this website on a PC. I was a little taken aback from the empty space and scrolling. Other than that, I like the tabbing and the way you formatted the rest of the poem.

Overall Impressions:
Although I was taken aback by the centering, I really liked your poem and I really liked what you were conveying. I really loved the imagery in Shaman's Trance as well as the rhythm & flow. The rhythm & flow was perfect and evoked a calmness in me. Thank you for that. However, as I always suggest to writers, go back and proofread to make sure you're conveying everything you want to convey. You might have missed some things you wanted to convey.

Rating:
***

Final Thoughts:
Keep up the good work and keep writing! You have a lot of talent. I hope you have a wonderful rest of the day. ~Jessica

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .