I like this story. You set the scene for your reader very well. There is good interaction with your characters. My favourite part was when you were describing the prank being set up for Johnny. There is a moral here also which I like. Be careful what you do because if you are not careful you can cause harm to someone else and it is possible that if you do something bad enough there is no fixing it or a big price will have to be paid to fix it. The only thing I have to mention here for improvement is there are a number of grammar error throughout the story. Great job! Write on!



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