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Hello there, Newbie! Welcome to WDC. *Wave4*
This is a Simply Positive Review.

*Flower3* You bring attention to the honey bee colony collapse that has been so evident across the nation. It seemed to happen mysteriously, several years ago, when each year we noticed less and less honey bees.

*Globe2* Some say global changes in weather, others say environmental disturbances such as vibrations or noises that are not within our hearing capabilities, and others say pesticides. Whatever the cause, it is sad indeed to see such a decline in their population.

Your poem painted vivid pictures and was smooth for the most part as a free verse. However, there were several lines that seemed a bit wordy and threw the rhythm off a bit. *Beakero*

Otherwise well done! *Vine1*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch



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