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First impressions:

I love the 30 Day Haiku and Senryu Challenge so I was excited when I clicked on yours and saw it was for that!! I have really learned to enjoy the Japanese forms recently and so I was glad it was something along those lines.

What I enjoyed/caught my attention:

I enjoyed how well you described the wind.

Suggestions:

This is really more of a personal choice thing but I get a lot of reviews that point it out when my Haiku sound like a sentence or complete thought! It really stands out to me now, and this one definitely makes a complete thought. I do enjoy Haiku a bit more when they are more fractured.

Overall Impression:

I liked it! Good job!



Write on!
skeason

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