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No Time To Scream Open in new Window. [13+]
There's more than just bikers and joggers in the park tonight...
by Angus Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi Angus Author Icon,

I'm reviewing as the judge for "Supernatural Writing Contest - Closed" Open in new Window..

*Skull*Plot: I enjoyed this terrifying story about creature devouring human beings to satisfy his hunger that, according to me, doesn't seem to end. And that's what I liked about he story.

*Skull*Characters: I saw four main characters. My favorite was Corey who happened to be as unaware as the girl about him being the creature's prey, but the story ended before I could see Corey's encounter with the creature, so it's left in suspense as to whether he will be eaten or not. The cop's reaction shows the merciless way in which the Beast killed people. *Thumbsup* for that.

*Skull*Setting: The park and the night. I liked it very much.

*Skull*Point of view: The first part was from the cop's POV. The second part was was from the creature's POV. The third part seemed like it was from the girl's POV but when you write, Watching her. Smelling her. Hunting her, it changes to be the beast's POV. As much as the two POVs blended so well and did not stir any confusion, I suggest that you separate the two POVs here.

*Skull*My favorite: At the end, the narrator happens to be the Beast. Is it possible that the Beast was the cop, especially since the cop was covering up for the murder by saying that hadn't been a bear sighting anywhere nearby? I really liked the suspenseful ending because Corey didn't know what was awaiting him. Neither do the readers.

Thanks for entering. Write on!
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