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Hi Vixey Todd Author Icon,

I'm reviewing as the judge for "Supernatural Writing Contest - Closed" Open in new Window..

I enjoyed this chapter about a lady who is sold to a vampire by her father who was not able to pay the vampire's debt. In the process, her husband dies and she ends up with the vampire's father because the vampire was not treating her well. I liked the flow and the characters very much.

I found it a bit unbelievable for Anna to easily notice that Dillion was a vampire and believe it. It should take some time and a lot of internal questions for her to know and believe in vampires. I mean, it's not usual for people to see vampires everyday, so I was expecting some sort of an unbelievable reactions and thoughts from Anna.

Other than that, well done. The supernatural element came out so clearly.

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