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 Review #4069241 |
 | The Regular Journal of a Teenage Boy #1  [E] Journal entry number one  |
| (4.5)| Hi Abno! For being only 15 you seem wise beyond your years. This is a very well written and thought out piece, and you obviously just didn't slap this down just for something to write. I'm a little older than you (OK, a lot-34 years), and I agree that this world is changing, and unfortunately for the worse. It's not even close to what it was when I was your age, and even then it wasn't close to what it was when my father was my age. As for those whiners, I also agree. If they don't like it, then they need to get up and do something about it. Just like these protesters are doing about this police brutality and the killing of unarmed kids in this country. Very nice piece, Abno. The spelling, punctuation, and grammar (or 'SPAG' as we sometimes refer to it on here) was flawless, and I can tell that you're a pretty smart kid. Thanks for sharing this, my friend! It was a pleasure to read your point of view on this subject, and I look forward to reading more of your pieces on here. Kee ponw ritin gon!
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