I discovered "A Christmas Enchantment"  on the Read an Unreviewed Newbie page. I am doing this review for "The Talent Pond" . The first sentence hooked me with A stormy winter night. The speaker makes the description part of the action, which moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

I liked: I like the description of the speaker trudging through the snow.

Technical Problems or Suggestions: I found no technical problems in this short piece. I suggest making this item part of a longer story or the beginning of a novel featuring the speaker.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this piece because it revealed the creativity and talent of the author. Write on.



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .