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 Dear Diary Open in new Window. [E]
Ramblings of a teenage girl and her diary entries.
by Wayne Foster Author Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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First Thoughts: I discovered "Dear DiaryOpen in new Window. on "The Shameless "Plug" PageOpen in new Window.. The first paragraph hooked me with Sandy's question why does life have to be soooo boring?

What I liked: I like Sandy because she is an intriguing and sympathetic character.

Suggestions For Improvement: This sentence appears to be Sandy's thoughts, Oh well diary time i guess. I suggest putting the sentence in italics. I also suggest making this part of a longer story or novel featuring Sandy as the main character.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because the main character is intriguing and the story has a great deal of potential. Write on.

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