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Given: Dec 31, 2014 at 8:31pm
Length: 807 Characters |
641 w/o WritingML
First Thoughts: I discovered "Dear Diary" on "The Shameless "Plug" Page" . The first paragraph hooked me with Sandy's question why does life have to be soooo boring?
What I liked: I like Sandy because she is an intriguing and sympathetic character.
Suggestions For Improvement: This sentence appears to be Sandy's thoughts, Oh well diary time i guess. I suggest putting the sentence in italics. I also suggest making this part of a longer story or novel featuring Sandy as the main character.
Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because the main character is intriguing and the story has a great deal of potential. Write on.
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