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Overall Impression:Hmmmm. A yarn if I ever read one; makes little sense first time through; second time what did Jack do? What did he do hittin' Martha who was ignoring him until he attacked. was he tryin' to save the big ole hen; he caused quite a fracas then came out a win. Now Jack is kinda nice an' kind, i think that was it; but never mind.

I'm laughing; the rhythm of this crazy story poem kept humming through my head and into this review. Jack wasn't much of a kid,not responsible even that day when he scared Martha as she plucked the hen that became Jack's remade him into a mighty fine man. OOPS, it's still happening as I write about Jack and this story; I'm trying to track. Seems Jack was converted that day and turned into good and made good grades as a boy like him should. Darn, I can't stop the chant of the poem that you wrote; It's crazier than hens in a poke.

Fantastic story poem filled with rhythm and a silly boy who was not responsible until the fracas he cause; then a bird, half plucked on one side, turned Jack around; made his mama proud.

I hafta stop here and get on with things; I just glad Jack straightened out certain things.

I love this; it was and still is fun to chant as you wrote this story of Jack.

ann

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