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Overall Impression:As I read and re-read this poem of passion and the maiden's desire to be "drawn in" to a relationship, she is captivated by whispered words as she focuses not on the whispers "but thoughts behind that hold me bound"as she is mesmerized by soft tones of voice, sweet words he says until she cannot hold back but pulls his lips to her, all the time doubting the truthfulness of his words and actions.

Iloved this line "don''t let your words dissolve in air" for the image it brings to mind for I've never thought of words dissolving in air, such a great line filled with poetic imagination.

At the same time the maiden is fearful saying, "don't want to fall into some snare", she was drawing the lover in closer and closer, magnetism at work until she gives in to him, right or wrong, honest or dishonest, she becomes his.

A well written, sensual poem; the Poet's words are soothingly seductive; Great job!!

Thanks for the seduction..........
*Smile*Ann

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