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Red With Regret Open in new Window. [13+]
Blitz poem based on an image prompt. Dark Dreamscapes contest entry (August 2014).
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Amazing!! I've tried writing a Blitz Poem form and know how difficult it can be, yet you've told a continuous story in so many lines and you've followed the form extremely well. Any poet who wants to learn the Blitz form could learn a lot from you. W0W!

the use of "RED and BLACK" in the first lines is a shadowing of things to come; all the way to sin, often or always shown in red and black which you've used in the final lines
" for our own darkness...Regret for our own transgressions...Transgressions...Darkness...
for we know 'transgressions' is another word for 'sin'.

I marvel at the continunity of this poem from beginning to end...somehow you made the lines fit perfectly to the form yet tell a message: the message of 'regret'

Great work.
ANN

 "Mi ta ku ye O yr sin" "We are all related" /c} (Cherokee) ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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