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 Fiery Hearts Open in new Window. [E]
Writer's Cramp entry 01/14/15
by Stargazer ~ DavidtheDreamer Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello there, Stargazer ~ DavidtheDreamer
This is a Simply Positive Review! *Sanddollar*

*Painting2* I loved the imagery woven into this poem. You bring the reader to a distant place and invite her to take a front row seat as she watches the dazzling displays setting the scene for two lovers.

*Fire* The heart is the fiery warmth amid the cold ice and snow surroundings. Around them, a child attempts to ride a trike on the snow covered ground and the dog playing, all blend the images in a very imaginative way.

*Tempcold* I think my favorite scene was the frozen fountain, because I could picture it in its stillness, yet see it majestically standing out, as a perfect spot for the couple to meet.

You bring the warmth and radiance of love along the icy scenery, making the beauty of both come together in a lively blend of human nature and a season's natural backdrop. *Writing*

*Starfishy* Clever use of the prompt words showing on the page, within your poem.


Loved this part:

"This day
This day

would
remain forever frozen
in fiery hearts."

*Violin* Beautiful way to end the verse. Wonderful use of the repeat line, "This day." It places just the right amount of emphasis without being redundant.

Well done! *Target*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch



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