Spiritual Newsletter 2-4-15.
features your piece in their pages.
I often use the NLs for reviewing material.

An opening scene representing birth,
continues through multiple stanzas.
A life learned and lived in the span of a short poem.

Form and structure are well laid out.
Emotionally the reader is intrigued with the progression.
Rhyming scheme is consistent.
Flow is rhythmical and emotionally charged.
Pace is slow, with much to take in.
Grammatically your piece is exquisite.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div

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