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 Prometheus  [E]
A dark poem about a false being who lives in a world that he hates in every possible way.
by Keaton Foster: Know My Hell!
Review of Prometheus  
Review by Thinking-Reed
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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This is Thinking-Reed *Smile* and I have reviewed:Prometheus. An uncomfortable poem that reflects the times we live in. Written three years ago it is prescient with its theme of hate and burning people to death.


Specifics:Its a quibble but I will say it anyway.decimate strictly applies to many things of which 1 in 10 is destroyed. So you can say 'the Roman Legion was decimated' but not 'the soldier was decimated'.

A provocative poem and interestingly written with the short lines centrally placed on the page. Generally the rhythm is good and strong tho' there are a few glitches.
A poem that made me think. Thanks.


These opinions are mine and I have written this review with the aim of being constructive and helpful to you.

TR
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