This is Thinking-Reed and I have reviewed:echoes brought you back. An evocative poem reminding me of Christina Rosetti's poem Echo (tho' on re-reading that they are very different.) Both are very sad and about losing someone very dear.


Specifics:line 6 icicle jars with me, they don't stand, they hang. Are there alternatives?

Hanging there like an icicle or maybe better Standing still like a spectre.


I like this poem and with the right few changes it could be really great. Thanks

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TR
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