This is Thinking-Reed and I have reviewed:Even if Saving You Sends Me to Hell. A poem about childhood demons but perhaps there is more. Tho there are quotation marks the other person remains mysterious. Perhaps an alter ego of the protagonist.


Specifics: quotation marks in verses 3 and 5 not closed. Or delete quotation marks line 1 of verse 4 and1 of verse 6.
Rhythm is variable. Try to get a regular rhythm, if you speak the words it becomes obvious where there are problems eg the final line.

A very good poem which can be worked on. Thanks
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TR
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