This is Thinking-Reed and I have reviewed:If I Gave You My Heart. Free verse description of the first tentative feelings of falling in love. So uncertain and full of doubt and questioning........'Would you love me...or leave me?'


Specifics: The rhythm is not always easy or regular for example: And we could fight our wars.

An interesting and tender poem which would be improved by polishing.

TR

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TR
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