Greetings, inky14dinky! Thank you for submitting your entry in the "Writing 4 Kids" .

Very nicely done, Henny! A great idea to use this thunderstorm prompt as an acrostic!

My only suggestions would be to italicize Go away, go away and consider bolding the first letters of each line. The latter is only a preference on my part, however, so it's up to you.

The situation is easily visualized! I can tell you've been through a thunderstorm or two in your lifetime.

Favorite line...

Once again I made it through

Have a great day and
K e e p on W r i t i n g !

Cubby ")


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