Your write or poem is
so right in what it says
and what it's trying to
convey
Yes and women need
to teach their daughters
the truths of what's up
and coming, because
fantasies are really just
lies to hide the truth of
what is happening to
those telling it
That is why everybody
needs a fantasy guy to
pretend is looken out
for them, so much so
much avoidance of the
truth
Thanks for the read..
Thoughts, questions
and points of view
You responded to this review 05/11/2015 @ 12:05am EDT
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