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 Daughters Born To bear Open in new Window. [E]
Its a rhyme about my feelings about how daughters are in life's long term race.A must read
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Your write or poem is
so right in what it says
and what it's trying to
convey

Yes and women need
to teach their daughters
the truths of what's up
and coming, because
fantasies are really just
lies to hide the truth of
what is happening to
those telling it

That is why everybody
needs a fantasy guy to
pretend is looken out
for them, so much so
much avoidance of the
truth

Thanks for the read..

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