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 Strip Trees Open in new Window. [ASR]
a short verse about the change of seasons.
by Geralyn Author Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Well for a short verse
Y'd say that was a
mouth full of bark

You have captured a
wonderful moment in
time, showing it's own
beauty through mime

As nature doesn't do
it's shout outs loud,
they quietly show us
all their wisdom while
we are in a crowd

That what is done
without great noise,
is of great wonder
when in a true poise

Thanks for the read..

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