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Hi ohsoquiet,

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I found the story very psychological since it's one's thoughts affecting their behavior and stirring fear. Alternatively, it could be a bad past experience causing one not to go to crowded places, no wonder this line - It might happen again. I found the poem scary because the fear with in us is more haunting than the external fear. Afterall, it's not the crowded places that causes fear, it's how we perceive these crowded places. It's all in the mind.

I like that the lines were very short because I felt like that made the message of the poem more prominent. Simple, clear, and scary. Great job!
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