Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 07-01-15
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An encouraging and educational take on balance.
Have you ever wondered how the gymnasts walk that balance beam thing? Years and years of practice go into it. They get up, fall, and get right back up to try again. Soon they are reaching the top of the balance beam world and capturing the gold.
Your piece purports "moderation"; in my opinion. Having just enough of both in life helps one achieve balance.
Form and structure are uniform and helps the reader along.
Flow is smooth as you go from point to point, enhanced by any apparent grammatical snafu's.
Pace is slow and steady, as the points you make sink in and on to the next. The encouraging conclusion leave the reader with hope that things can be in balance in their lives, with a little effort toward that goal.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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