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Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 07-01-15
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A rather philosophical feel to this piece.
That's the imagery working on this readers mind.
Form and structure are standard fare.
Flow is smooth and rhythmical.
There is a beginning of a rhyme scheme, which dwindles later along in the poem.
The pace is steady on.
Grammatically speaking; no obvious snafu's pop out.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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