Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 07-01-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.
Thank you for sharing your piece with us.
You have a consistent rhyming scheme that helps the piece flow in such a smooth way.
The flow is also enhanced by the absence of any visible grammatical snafu's.
The pace is progressive, as you draw the reader into the final lines.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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