Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 07-01-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.
I marvel at the amount of people who say "perfect" and strive for perfectionism. The adage "no one is perfect", appears nonsense to them.
We can strive to do our best and when we do that consistently we will be content with the things we do and achieve.
Hey this all from the imagery of your piece.
Form and structure are "perfect"; lol
The flow is smooth and easy on the eyes.
Pace is slow and steady on.
Grammatically speaking your piece is "perfectly fine".
Overall you presented your argument against perfectionism and put in it's place offered an alternative that is attainable.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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