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Words beat physical strength
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Hi! I am Aqua and I found your poem through the Random Read and Review tool so here I am! *Bigsmile*

The title of your poem and the brief description really caught my attention because all of us have read the quote "The Pen is mightier than the sword" so they reminded me of this quote and I remember I have read a poem about it before but it has been a long time since I saw it once more so it was a nice change *Smile*.

A theme known widely but the way you presented it was good. I liked how you started the poem because it gave the impression of the reader that no matter what she does, the narrator will not be harmed and the narrator is not afraid. I could feel authority and fearless in the beginning and as the poem progressed, I understood why you were fearless, it's the words that can never be taken back once said and that is the thing, they are powerful than any physical beating and I quite agreed with you on that!

What I wish for in your poem is that you lengthen it with adding more details, more stanzas, more scenes and emotions. Otherwise, a powerful theme in a good poem!

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