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| (4.5)| Hi Charlie ~ once again! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item. One of the reasons why I love reading poetry is because of the so many different ways in which we can interpret the same word, the same poem. Sometimes, the reader's interpretation is the same as the poet's but at other times, it is completely different than that of the poet, even the poet might not have thought about it! I chose your poem because nature is another of my favourite genre and the image really caught my attention and I wanted to read what you had written on this prompt. The opening stanza was excellent! I loved that you used the crows, which were quite a minor thing in the image, but you still didn't ignore it. It added a good, chilling, effect in your poem because I have always found the cawing of the crows as a bad sign, evil, for some reason!  At first after reading the poem, I thought it was a romance under the nature poem but then I read 'needles' and 'icy frenzy' that changed my deduction from nature romance to nature dark romance. The flow of your poem was good, the vocabulary you used was effective especially in the first and the stanza of your poem. Wonderful! My favourite stanza was the last one because I loved the wording and the idea there!  Thank you for sharing your work with us! Write On! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 05/04/2016 @ 7:39pm EDT