im here to review your peice as a simply positive review and an anniversary review. Lol its a good way to double task. It keeps thing easier and cleaned up a bit.

Plot)
Awww what a cute poem. Very nice work. The whole thing about the father not having the money to get his boy a toy and then the next morning finding the exact toy the boy wanted under the tree.

Grammer)
Impressive grammer.

Format)
Your format was a typical poem format good job.

Keep up the good work and write on.

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