Poetry newsletter 8-26-15 is where your piece is featured.
I often use the NLs to find reviewing fodder.

What I think makes a good novel is a lot of good poems stretched out and turned into paragraphs.
You take the reader on an adventure to create the perfect poem (at least that is how I interpret your piece). It appears you have much experience in composing them too.
Flow here is quite smooth and the reader is grateful that your piece is so grammatically snafu free.
Pace is steady on and the details you add throughout are enough to want to know more about why you don't finish novels.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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