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Poetry newsletter 8-26-15 is where your piece is featured.
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Wow hat a sparkling imagery filled piece you have here.
You paint a picture that the reader falls into as you tell the tale of your last moments outdoors, before sunset comes to town.
Form and structure are down right solid.
Flow is smooth and enhanced by the absence of grammatical snafu's.
Pace is quite steady and detail filled.
overall, the emotional feeling here is that of warm fuzzy's and contentment.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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