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![]() | Flightsong II ![]() A poem about traveling by plane... ![]() |
Poetry newsletter 8-26-15 is where your piece is featured. I often use the NLs to garner reviewing material. It almost sounds like the SST, before it went out of use. You describe the feeling you get as you are flying through the air with the greatest of ease. The reader sees the scene you set, as if we are there with you. That's imagery that pops! It has a poetic timber here. The structure is efficient. The flow is smooth save for a slight bump in the road. "To far shres and distant climes you go" This is where the piece slows down a little but it takes nothing away from the overall feel and meaning of this piece. Pace is slow and rightly so as the reader absorbs the wonder of flight through your poetic heart. Write on! Copenator out! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ![]() ![]()
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