Hi sarahsbooks,



Title and cover image:

The title is attractive. After all, who can resist all that sticky sweet goodness.

The cover image is appropriate to the activity, and is eye-catching enough that it should entice prospective participants.

Activity images:

Your images are appropriate to your activity, in that they successfully continue the theme of a bakery. They also provide a lovely visual for any casual browsers. It's those browsers who will turn into your future customers.

Rules:

Your rules are clearly and simply laid out. I think everyone knows how raffles/lotteries work here on WDC, but it's always good to see the basics reinforced.

You have different beneficiaries for each of the sweet lotteries, and you state which group will benefit from each of them. I like this idea, and it's a great way to pull in additional customers.

Prizes:

You give out the same award for each of the sweets lotteries. A percentage share of the GPs is the most common reward in raffles here on WDC, but I do like that you are offering a Merit Badge to any winners who win over 10,000 GPs.

Suggestions:

You state your closing date as September 31st, but there are only 30 days in September. You should get that changed.

I would also suggest that you include a time. Most people would presume that you will close at 11:59pm WDC time (since this is the accepted norm), however some contests and activities do close at 11:59am.

Closing remarks:

Wishing you success with your activity, and have a very happy WDC birthday week.

Thank you for sharing this item! Please keep on writing!


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