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 Review #4161736 |
 Welcome to WDC Bronya! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! I caught the scent of this seasonal children's item with its inviting fun title on the Read A Newbie Page!  It is a delicious read with it's rhythmic flow and easy rhyme. It has a light and comical tone which contrast its theme of brewing children, so apt an idea for hallowe'en theme.  The only verse which seemed out of sync as far as flow was verse 4 as the lines were shorter than in the other verses. The image is cute and funny too as they get all cleaned up. The word "scrub " works well here as I thought of scrubbing potatoes for stew. LOLThe vocabulary and style is well accessible to children. The idea of receiving this recipe instead of a treat is brilliant. It is like she is warning them.  This was entertaining and I know some kids I'd like to share it with! Thanks for sharing your craft and creativity! Keep it up!Light on the path as you write on! eyestar 
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You responded to this review 09/30/2015 @ 11:01pm EDT