Loving and being loved in return has a pleasant effect on the mind of the person. Discovery and reciprocation of love is in harmony with the daybreak bringing hope to realize a much awaited dream.
Descriptive quality of the story is interesting.Emotions are well voiced and the hope in his heart seems to have quickened his pulse.
"In that very moment, his already racing heart stopped beating and started to race more wildly, as if it would come out of his chest."
Sentences are well balanced and the prose rhythm is evenly kept.High emotions make people speechless or make it difficult for them to say the easy " I love you.'

A good read.

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