you cracked me up with this piece. I do have one question....how do you 'boil all together' when you only have one drop of sweat? Roflol Maybe you should make it a lot more, throw in some tears of frustration. Just kidding. I love the poem as it is.

You have good meter. The rhyme is consistent all the way through.

I love that you vanquish the ghosts just in time for NANOWRIMO's start!

I love your poem. I don't give many 5's. I wasn't going to read these because curses didn't sound like my cup of tea. But yours is great. Thanks for sharing.
love, LinnAnn