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Hello, Bobby Lou Stevenson Author Icon!
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"The Humorous Poetry Contest" Open in new Window. [18+].


*Star* I enjoyed reading your funny entry! I like the way this starts out like any ordinary day with someone meeting a friend. I wasn't expecting how the events would end for this poor guy, but great punchline. *Bigsmile*

*Star* As usual with your humorous poetry, the pace and rhyming are spot on. The rhyming always gives it that extra push to make it funny.

*Star* I smiled through the whole poem, but the last line is what gave me the biggest laugh. Thanks for supporting the contest with your entry! *Cool*

~Lornda

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