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*Star* This is a funny take on the Shake & Bake instructions! I thought for a short poem it was very entertaining to read! *Cool*

*Star* The word choice is very important to a short poem of this nature. You only have a few lines to send the best impact of a visual, and you accomplished it by using the right words at the right time for the biggest laugh.

*Star* A fun poem to read that's for sure! I got a good laugh out of it. *Bigsmile* Thanks for the constant support of the contest!

~Lornda

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