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The Joust Open in new Window. [E]
A teenager tries once again to master his sport. Who will win the Battle of the Board?
by Angels in my Ear Author Icon
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Review by Lornda Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello, Angels in my Ear Author Icon!
Thanks for your entry to
"The Humorous Poetry Contest" Open in new Window. [18+].


*Star* Cool entry! I had a fun time reading your poem, and got a kick out of the picture prompt. Excellent job with the style in which it was written. It made the poem come alive! *Cool*

*Star* To have this written from the perspective of the skateboard, makes it fun to read. The word choice was perfect to give a clear visual along the way. You didn't need a lot of words to accomplish what was happening, so here again, you need to choose the right wording for this to come across in a clear way.

*Star* Overall, a fun poem to read! It's an entertaining entry, and I got a kick out of the last line. Nice! Thanks for supporting the contest! *Bigsmile*

~Lornda

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