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I NEED A DIVORCE FROM U Open in new Window. [13+]
THE LETTER 'Q' COMPLAINS OF THE LOVELESS MARRIAGE
by Donkey Hoetay Author Icon
Review by Lornda Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello, Donkey Hoetay Author Icon!
Thanks for your entry to
"The Humorous Poetry Contest" Open in new Window. [18+].


*Star* This was an entertaining entry that had me laughing at different times, so the timing of the humor was spot on! I think the concept alone is a funny one, and the words danced along smoothly to paint a good visual! *Cool*

*Star* Awesome job on the word choice. Wow, you rhymed some complicated words together. Way to go! I thought the rhyming added so much to the humor, and it kept the poem going at a good pace. One little typo: U disgust me, I can't lie, It's my... It's shouldn't be capitalized. Or, maybe the comma should be a period. *Smile*

*Star* Overall, a fun poem to read! It started with strong humor from the first lines and just kept going from there. I liked how the whole poem was developed in a logical order to tell a funny story! Thanks for supporting the contest! *Bigsmile*

~Lornda

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